Feedback & Reflection on Draft DPS

Peer Feedback

  • effective spacing, nothing is cramped together
  • image is nice and big if main artist with an effective background
  • add a border around image too add some shape as it slightly plain at the moment

Teacher feedback

  • the photo has an odd placing of the satellite dish…?
  • who is he?
  • pull quotes?
  • paragraphs
  • clearer headlines…
  • what is it all about?

Targets for development

  • add a more variety of colours
  • more quotes in bigger font
  • add some drop capitals
  • page numbers

 

 

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