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Feedback: Front Cover

• spacing between the text underneath ‘what’s inside’ to be equal
• conventional big bold text
• appropriate cover lines

Feedback: Contents Page

• layout is conventional
• text is all the same size and font
• nice bright colours and patterning of background suits the genre

Feedback: Double Page Spread

• appropriate colour to make it look more interesting
• added detail of  boxes around the words make it more creative and unique
•  colourful border around main image makes it stand out