Feedback

• marble background is effective
• nice masthead
• fonts on contents page
• good image on DPS
• basics are there

Targets

• make sure spacing is equal either side of masthead
• put barcode on right hand side
• move writing down, in the way of the face
• create staggered text
• unstretch the model
• make everything centered
• change background for contents page as it is overused
• page numbers
• align cover lines
• big headline for each story
• DPS room for quotes
• add standfirst in bigger and bolder fonts
• get rid of hyphens
• stand out quotes
• add paragraphs
• by lines