First Draft

New Draft

A lot of the changes I’ve made since making my first draft are to do with the colours in my DPS; firstly I’ve made the green of the pull quote and the title a lot more vibrant and neon, I’ve also put black boxes around some of my text to make the green pop even more. Doing this also brings more attention to the pull quote which is usually the first part of the article the reader sees because their eye is drawn to the larger writing. This should entice the reader to read the whole article by being interested in the context of the quote.

Another change I’ve made is adding a bit more drama and intrigue to my stand-first, which was a bit bland before-hand.