First Draft

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

New Draft

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

In my first draft I got a lot of feedback for things to change, mostly to do with making the whole page more cohesive and professional, for example adding more design elements/graphics. I also changed the shape of my image to cut out the costume because the mise-en-scene wasn’t right. Finally, the page numbers weren’t spaced apart enough for a full magazine so I had to change those too.