For our draft 3 we have taken into account tips from our teacher as well as our peers to see what needs to be changed for our final draft. We had our peers comment on our videos because we have all been doing the same project so they may have some ideas that we had not thought of from going through the same process.

Some things we have changed since draft 2 include adding some push-in effects to make the footage seem less static, we’ve also put the same effects on all of the shots with the sock puppets to add a continuous theme. Another addition is the title card at the start because we felt this introduced the video well and created a less sudden start.

For our final draft we will now take onboard the peer feedback we received below: