For our final draft we have made a few small adjustments to our video in-line with the feedback we have been given. Some changes we have made include adding a fade out at the end of the video as this was one of the peer critiques we got, this made our video have a much more definitive ending as the music fades out as well. We also had to change the artist’s name on the title card to a fictional one as we cannot use the original artist’s name. Finally, we removed the tear animation shown to us by the animators at Specsavers because we didn’t have time to add anymore so the single tear looked disjunctive to the rest of the video.

Please view our final draft below: