Reflecting on my first draft of my double page spread, I recognise I need to add some essential conventions such as a stand-first and a byline. I would also like to make use of the empty space a bit more by perhaps wrapping the text around the triangle with my model in.

Some feedback from one of my peers, Amy Grief:

• I don’t like the font of Sonny Rain.
• Add another quote.
• Add a byline and photographer.
• Fill the black gap to the right of the triangle.

Next I would like to use my own targets and the feedback of my peers to make my magazine more conventional of the genre of country and to make sure the layout is clear so that the article can be easily read.