Above is the second draft of our music video, which includes our narrative that we most recently shot. On reflection, this draft has a few strengths and a lot of improvements that need to be made.

What went well:

• In certain segments, we have edited well to the beat.
• We have included a variety of shots including close ups, mid shots and jump cuts; just to name a few.
• We have experimented with effects and filters to coordinate with our genre of electro-pop.

Improvements to be made:

• Add a title that flickers to announce the title of the song.
• Use filters and colour correction to make the best out of the grainy and dark shots.
• Use the filters consistently throughout the video, so the effect looks purposeful, as it’s intended to be.
• Experiment with transitions between clips.
• Increase the pace of edit with the song.