My DPS (double page spread) needed some tweaks after the first draft. In photoshop I brightened up the image on the right as it was a bit too dark on my first draft. I also added the magazine logo to the banner and made sure that the spacing in my banner was all the same to make it look clean and professional. I changed the slanted bars on the top right and bottom left from red to the black and white stripes to keep the branding consistent. I made the by line text bigger and added a drop cap at the start of the article to finish it off.

What’s next

• Adjust line spacing on banner
• Remove hyphens
• *headbang on every listen
• Use numbers not words in the banner
• *sense
• line spacing between numbers and coverline in the banner bar
• Center the quotes
• Two mentions of photographer
• Could put breakdown logo on top right hand corner