What’s new?
- ‘Apothis’ logo instead of the word
- Italics for the quote and moved closer
- Added edition and price
- Added another red line
- Wrapped text around Charlie’s top
- Added another artist to the cover (attack attack ! album)
What’s new?
- Just numbers, no ‘pg’
- New featured front cover
- Used download logo instead of text
- Changed ‘article’ to ‘exclusive feature’
- De-hyphenated
- Moved text further from the edge
- Got rid of ‘for my article’
- Fixed typo: ‘knowledge’
- ‘Until now’ in colour
- Every time I mention Breakdown I used the logo
What’s new?
- Adjusted line spacing on the banner
- Removed hyphens
- Fixed typos: ‘headbang’ & ‘sense’
- Changed words to numbers in banner
- Quotes centered
- Only 1 mention of the photographer
- Breakdown logo in the top right corner
What I need to do next
Front cover
- Typo Mitchell*
- Fill empty space on t-shirt
- Make CD clear that it’s a CD
- Put pug on an angle
Contents Page
- Get rid of ‘pg’
- Add space between the two stories
- ‘GIGS’ and ‘NEWS’ font size
- Page 3*
Double Page Spread
- Align text at the bottom
- Add something to show end of article