The Look Book – The Package

The reason for making this look book is so that we could analyze common themes among different bands in the genres branding and image. To do this we gathered tour posters, album covers, and other promotional material from a handful of bands and then analyzed them individually to pick out key themes and similarities. Many of the tour posters are illustrative based and use big bold type faces to grab attention. The use of colour is also important to take note of as, although the colours are vibrant and bright, there tends to be only two or three colours used. This was a useful task for us as it gave us an idea of what our digipak will look like in order to appeal to our audience and communicate ideologies.

For our Digipak, we want to follow the common theme of a more illustrative based look with a limited but vibrant colour pallet. This will provide a familiar look for the audience but refreshing in the sense that it’s an original idea.

Our Mission Statement – The Package Brand

After finishing up with the music video, we had to start thinking about how our band will be marketed and viewed by the public. These slides explore aspects such as target audience, unique selling point, call to action, and our mission statement. By writing up our ideas and coming up with an idea of how our band is to be presented, we are able to use this with designing our Digipak and social media page in order to tailor to our audience.

Peer Review – Draft 5

Peer Feedback – Good
  • ‘Good use of filters’ – Lilly Le Page
  • ‘I like the mix of narrative and performance’ – Anya Bougourd
  • ‘Good editing to the beat’ – Mia Le Cheminant
  • ‘Good energy’ – Mia Le Cheminant
  • ‘Guitar and drums sync well’ – Mia Le Cheminant
Improvements
  • ‘More close ups of narrative, house, and musicians’ – Mia Le Cheminant
  • ‘Wider variety of shots including close ups’ – Lilly Le Page
  • ‘Scale shots in Premier Pro to get a wider range of shots’ – Anya Bougourd

From this feedback and other feedback, it is clear that the only thing that we are really missing now is close up shots. We did have a shoot planned specifically to get close up shots but that has had to be postponed. We still plan to do this however as close up shots, specifically of the singer, are an important convention for our genre. It is essential for conveying the star image to the audience  through the facial expressions of the singer and portraying emotion.

Screencastify – Teacher Feedback – Draft 4

Targets for draft 5
  • Less frequent use of the mirror effect as at the moment it’s used too much and loses it’s effect
  • More focus on the skateboarding in the narrative to show that skateboarding is all he has left and it pushes him over the edge because he can’t do it
  • Diegetic sound of footsteps in the last shot to add depth and also because it contrasts the birds singing in the intro
  • Close ups of the singer are needed as it is a key convention for the genre
  • Also close ups of the man in the narrative when he takes the role of the singer to show more emotion

Specsavers Feedback – Draft 3

Draft 3 – What’s changed
  • Replaced the out of focus narrative footage
  • More close ups on vocalist
  • Colour correction on narrative footage

Personal Improvements
  • Add push in on full band shot to keep engagement and pull focus on to the singer
  • Colour correction on full band shot so that it looks the same as the other shots for consistency
  • Colour correction on a few shots is a bit extreme and make the shot too grainy so needs to be adjusted
Specsavers Feedback
  • Add grain to all the footage using an adjustment layer as the narrative looks too static
  • Colour correction on narrative footage by duplicating the clips and adding an ‘overlay’ bend mode

These improvements outlined above will be made to change the overall look of the video. We want the video to look follow conventions and look grungy and rough, hence the feeback from specsavers telling us how to add grain and motion effects to the video.

Music Video Draft 2

Me and Max analyzed this video from a previous year to see what they did well and set some targets for our own video. I picked this video as the performance section is of a band and it has a similar narrative structure.

What this video does well

The quick pace of edit in this music video works well for the genre. There is also a good use of visual effects throughout the video which are well placed within the edit to work well with the structure of the song. There is also a subtle but effective colour grade over the whole video. The range of shot lengths and angles is also done well with plenty of close ups on the band. The mise en scene for this video, costume and props in particular, is strong. The bands look follows genre conventions well and shows clear star image.

Targets for Improvement
  • Replace the out of focus narrative footage with the new footage with improved mise en scene to portray better star image
  • More close ups on vocalist as it is conventional for the genre and to help show the emotion of the song
  • Desaturated colour correction on narrative footage to give it a grungy look

Shoot 2 Reflection (Narrative)

The main goal of the narrative shoot, besides the actual filming it’s self, was to ensure that, by utilizing mise en scene and camera, the character was portrayed correctly. We made sure to use canted angles and jump shots to show the character as imperfect and troubled. We had Max’s character in dark and baggy clothes to reflect his mood.

Our second shoot involved gathering all the footage we needed to display the narrative. This was a much more efficient process when compared to the performance shoot. This is due to having a much clearer vision and plan of what we needed to film. We had a story board which acted as a base of the shots we needed. We looked at the story board a wrote down all the key shots and what angles were to be used and also went and added some extra notes of footage to get to potentially use in-between the key shots if we needed.

Throughout the filming process, I directed Max to help get the best performance possible to help clearly display the narrative. This often involved me telling him to try and put more exaggeration into the emotions he was meant to portray. For example, in any shots where he was standing or walking about, I told him to slouch his shoulders forward and to be loose and relaxed with his movements. This helped to show his character in a state of poor mental health and low motivation.

However, looking back at the footage once we we back in school we realised that a large amount of the footage was out of focus which meant we had to shoot again during our summer holidays. We followed the same process as before but just had to make sure that the camera was all set up correctly for each shot. We also made a small costume change as we thought that having Max wear black clothes fits better with the image we were trying to portray.

What went well
  • Planning shots
  • Planning angles and framing
  • Directing Max
What didn’t go so well
  • Making sure the camera was in focus
  • Costume design