Here is the second draft of my magazine cover.

What’s new

• I have added a stroke around the ‘presents’ as it makes it easier to read against the two different color background
• Bar-code and Price
• Changed the font of the Issue and Date to make it more legible
• Added more to the cover lines

Targets

• Make it stand out more
• Add more features to make it a bit more eye-catching
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• Add another colour