This is my final draft to my magazine.
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Below is the teacher screencastify response to my first final draft.
Targets
Front Cover
- Align ‘Tour Review’
- Add more detail about ‘bluebell’?
- Add Graphic illustration
Contents Page
- Match Font Size
- Grammar Changes
- Add two more content page ‘nodes’
- Add more detail about ‘skat’
DPS
- Change layout
- Add more colour
- Make Image of fran bigger
My Success Criteria for my next draft is as follows
- Make general SPAG corrections
- Format Certain text so they are a consistent size and align in certain areas
- Add detail to both my front cover and my contents page
- Add more color and correct the layout of the DPS.