This is my second draft of my Music Video, In this draft I added content from 2 shoots, Both Performance. More importantly I still need to shoot and add the narrative. This draft is a definite improvement over the first one, featuring a new range of shots including movement ones. I also sued editing to make what were boring shots, and instead make them more interesting. My most important priority is getting my narrative filmed, as without it my music video is filled with black screens randomly.