Above is draft 2 of my music video

This is our second draft for our music video, which we have incorporated the narrative shoot into.

I think that this draft went well and is quite appealing for a second draft, however, the pace in some parts of the video is quite slow and could do with a much faster pace in the editing.

What went well:

  • Most of the shots are edited to the beat of the song
  • The video is synced well to the audio
  • There are good shots of the performers and the performance

What could have gone better:

  • A much faster and more upbeat edit
  • More narrative and continuity
  • Include the missing shots