Above is the draft 3 of my groups music video.

In this iteration we included a lot more narrative planning for it, we took on earlier comments about how the venues change to quickly and too often so we have reduced that to give a better sense of where the performers are and to limit confusion. A more varied approach also took place so we used similar shots consecutively to give the upbeat feel of the music video whilst not making it appear as a mess.


  • Include close ups of the singer so you can see his mouth
  • Implement all our narrative shots
  • Change some editing so it fits the beat
  • Add close ups of props, (guitar etc.)