What went well:
  • The beginning shot of the performers entering the scene
  • A lot of individual shots
  • Straight cut to main singer is good
  • Great edit with the door being smashed at 2:43
  • Great choice of venues
  • Great main performer and performance
  • Great props and mise-en-scene
  • Good narrative with Ollie

What could have been better:

  • The drumming at the beginning is slightly off beat
  • Sudden cuts to different locations, confusing
  • Start off with the band as a group and use individual shots elsewhere
  • Some syncing to the beat is off
  • Face is covered by the microphone in most of the shots
  • More energy in the edit
  • Too many venues at once
  • Connection with camera on and off
  • Close ups at pertinent places in song
  • More narrative, continuity
  • Lucie not relevant
  • Not much movement in shots, too static