Above is a peer assessed video review of our music video.

Some changed we had made were a change of narrative representation which is now currently the theme of the 7 deadly sins. We also played around with some effects to give our genre appropriate visualisation such as implementing a grungy overlay through colour manipulation.  A part we were pleased with at the end of the video was a very fast edit of when the narrative and performance combine which gives a really strong impact on the audience.

Targets for improvement

  • Speed up pace of editing, some shots are too long
  • Include a wider variety of shots
  • Edit out some black frames caused by editing error