For my second Draft of my DPS I have made the following adjustments:

• I made the main image bigger so that she was larger
• I made the page numbers bigger
• I added the guitar and also added a logo onto it
• I justifyed the text and then wrapped it around the quote and image fully
• I made the page numbers bigger
• I removed all hyphens
• I added photographer and writer credits
• I added the logo in the top left corner
• I moved the quotation up as the text fitted better around it

I think that this has improved my DPS as it has added a little bit more to it and made it more exciting. Next I think that I can make some more adjustments to it. For example making some of the fonts easier to read such as the credits. I also need to recheck my line spacing, as they are still not equal. I also want to make them image of Paige even bigger, as it will have more impact.