Below is our Draft 3 edit of the video and the feedback we received from peers;
From this and my own ideas, for the next edit I’d like to aim to work on the colour correction of shots, include some of the red filter demonstrated earlier on my blog, as well as include more TV footage from a new shoot to demonstrate what we’ve learned from the Specsavers visit, as well as some general touch-ups in terms of cutting speed and transitions in places in order to match the energy level we are aiming for.