Here is the second draft, now adding all of the details and notes inside to give it more character and narrative, compiled from some images and documents used in the music video to create the link between them, as well as adding the spine alongside the back cover.
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From this draft, we got our teacher to submit a feedback video and give his opinion on the areas that need improvement for the next draft;
In summary, for the next draft I’ll need to;
- Fill up the empty space on the back cover, add more stains
- Add record label and bar code details on back cover
- Add more notes and a better idea of the theories inside visible around the edge of the front cover
- Make sure the fold in the centre of the inside cover doesn’t disrupt the design in any way