I changed quite a lot after my first draft as I wasn’t happy with the overall aesthetic. The main thing I changed was the background, I had a pink translucent layer over my image on the first draft which I got rid of for the second draft and also moved around the page numbers and headlines to expose the models face.
I also changes the image in the bottom left which I cut out and I am pleased which this as it bring another model into my magazine giving my readers another insight of what to expect throughout my magazine
I also spent time lining up all of my headings as they were out of line. and looked messy
I then added details into my contents page such as the ‘overload’ logo and a reference to my models who are ‘B2B’
another detailed I added was a white strike to the right hand numbers to make them stand out from the dark background
What’s next…
I realised after saving this that I have left a line In under the contents heading which I need to remove. (silly mistake)
I am still not 100% sure about the layout and text colours etc as not sure if the white typeface blends into the background too much
the social media details are also quite hard to read as the type face is very small so I may try add a background to make the text stand out from the model
I might replace the pink line details with something else as I also used this on my double page spread and don’t want a theme to be continued from th4e contents to the dps
another comment I was given was about linking the two rows of contents more as the right side has a translucent pink block heading them but the left doesn’t and therefore they feel slightly separate
