Above is our first rough cut that we edited from our first shoot, although the aim of this was to be a rough cut of the whole song purely with performance footage we did not gather enough footage to do this so have uploaded the three sections of the songs that we have edited with performance footage. This was an issue because we didn’t film the song the whole way through and ended up only filming a few clips of the same lines multiple times, this made us realize that our priority is to film the whole song through in different locations using different cinematography multiple times rather than just filming short clips of specific lines. I am confident we have collected the majority of our performance footage and now just need to focus on our narrative shoot to fill in the gaps.

What I like about our rough cut:

• I am pleased with the quality of shots we have
• The close ups are very effective and look really good in the rough cut
• I am pleased with the editing we have used – glitch effect and fade in effect as well as colour filters
• The slow-mo on the smashing of the photo frame is very effective
• we managed to sync the shots to the song well

what needs improving:

• we need to gather more footage so that we can create a rough cut of the whole song with more footage
• Need to ensure all of the clips are synced perfectly
• make sure we are getting a range of shots including high angle, low angle, long shots swell as close ups
• film whole song though in every location so we have loads of clips to choose from when editing