This is our draft 2 for our music video, there are still quite a lot of gaps which need to be filled so we have just inserted text for what needs to be filmed there. We are still lacking a majority of the narrative as we weren’t happy with some of the footage we had filmed and would like to re do it to a higher standard.

Here I have self assessed our draft 2 to help me see what is good and what is missing/needs work in this draft. This self assessment is very useful to help see what I know needs more work to make everything excellent.

What is good – 

• the effects and filters we have added In are minimal but effective
• the performance lip sync clips are in time with the song
• we have made good use of close up shots as well as long shots
• the pool footage is very effective

What needs work- 

• we need to finish the narrative shoot to complete a full draft with no gaps
• we need to rethink the narrative to not focus on drug substances and base the storyline more on her emotions
• insert more cliff footage as it is very effective
• add more colour flashing lip sync clips like one at end throughout

Teacher feedback 

• extend the slo motion of the smashing photo frame clip
• make sure the note is long enough to be able to read
• add more FX
• bring some of the current narrative footage forward to make more sense