Here is our music video draft 3!!

I am really happy with how it is looking so far and we have managed to fill a lot of empty gaps since draft 2 and now just need to gather the rest of our narrative footage to fill the gap where the man is singing (therefore cannot be performance).

We were able to make this draft of a better standard after taking in the feedback we got from supersavers about our draft 2 and use these editing tips to add more FX to our video.

There are still a lot of things which need improving before our 4th and then final draft but I think we are making good progress and gathering the reaming footage we need for draft 4 will help us then focus on the little details in editing to make it perfect.

Below is a screen castify from Miss giving us another perspective and more useful feedback to help us when creating our 4th draft:

Feedback overview:

• dissolve shots between bathtub clips to make smoother transition
• longer on letter shot to make it clear to read it
• more footage on the photo and slow down of it smashing
• look at what shots are in black and white, need to make sense
• over shoulder shot of photo album
• fade out flame shot
• jump cut on cliffs to 3 different shots
• rearrange cliff shots to create more variety
• get remainder of footage!!!