In order to get more feedback on our music video we had our draft 3 peer assessed to give us another opinion on what is good or bad in each element of the music video. This showed us what we can work on to make sure all elements of our video in draft 4 are as good as they can be.

from this feedback I am able to recognise that we can work on adding more transitions, making sure our shots display a variety of movement and that all of the clips used are steady and not shaky unless on purpose.

This feedback was really helpful as It gave us our best element of the video so far and the biggest thing that needs to be worked on which for us is the narrative at the moment as we have not finished all of our filming therefore the storyline doesn’t completely make sense at the moment.

This task will be really useful continuing onto our 4th draft as it gives us clear things which we need to work on to improve.