Music Video Draft 4
Here is our Draft 4 music video and a screen castify of targets our teacher has done below.
Targets For Improvement –
- Get rid of the boarders – Not meant to be there
- Sound effects odd if there isn’t more
- Likes dissolves transitions
- Not the twirl transition – looks cliché
- Likes cutting mid sentence
- Likes neon flash transition
- Likes the mirror effect – Do it somewhere else?
- Some nature shots in black and white and some in colour need continuity
- Make ghoshting bigger front 1min 30 ish
- Weird nature shot of grass 1 min 30 ish
- 1 min 40 ish create a similar ghosting on same vid but for other side
- 2 min sunset get frame dissolved as too sharp
- 2 min cut to scale in shot after she lifts her head up
- Nature needs to be dissolved in and out so they arn’t harsh
- 2 min 30 weird transition CHANGE
- 2 min 32 slow down the nature as it can dissolve in n out
- 2 min 47 not sure of shot as naturalistic moment
- 2 min 50 doesn’t like black and white clips
- 3 min 10 ghost her both sides
- 3 min 15 change nature shot from sky to something specific
- 3 min 20 ish fade harsh boarder on frame
- Likes flowers in eye at the end
- Make the eye clip longer and play with it more
- Really look at transitions and speed
- Last clip – should stay with her not the other clip.
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