Below are all 3 of my designs for my magazine in their 3rd draft. I have also embedded my teachers feedback below.

 

In summary here are the improvements my teacher recommended:

Front Cover

• Move the main cover line with the name of my main cover star to bottom left
• Make sure the “Win!” cover line in inline with the others
• Make “Izzy” bigger

Contents Page 

• Change the font on the categories to the bold modern one
• Go through spelling
• Move “Izzy spills all” down so it’s not on her face

Double Page Spread

• Move the article on the right page to the right to avoid the fold
• Tryout making the “Q” gold

Now that I have received my feedback I will be making these final changes and adjustments to complete my first ever magazine.