In this draft, we added a transition called ‘dip to white’ to create a flashback effect which is used just after there is a trigger shot so we understand what has happened previously in the narrative.
This is our draft 1:
Here is the feedback we received from YouTube on this draft:
Targets and what to tweak:
- check the colour correction to make sure it makes sense to the audience
- at 1.28, drumming is slightly out of time
- review the lip syncing at 1.50 onwards to ensure it is in time
- re insert shot where it flickers to avoid this happening
- quicker editing in places
- slow down near the end so that it doesn’t end suddenly