This is a montage I’ve made with Laurence and Joely as to prepare for the making of my thriller, in this I make a paper airplane and at first I fail then I succeed,  This helps me in showing that time has passed whilst not taking up a lot of time this could be very useful when making my thriller.

Strengths:

• I like the implementation of the music during the last 10 seconds of the clip, even though the music was sped up you couldn’t tell and it still gave the effect that we were aiming for.
• The editing during the creation of the paper planes really speeds up the scene as a whole and fits really well with the clip overall.

Weakness:

• There is a shot at 0:28 that is completely out of focus, which makes this last scene feel of a lower quality then the rest of the clip.
• There is a few continuity errors throughout the clip, the most obvious is when I first crumple up the plane, as when it hits the ground it’s upside-down and when I grab it it’s right side up.