Due to youtube access within our school, this video has been taken down.

After making our final pitch for our music video we discussed our pitch to the teacher and spoke about how our star image will be conveyed throughout the music video and how much perfomance, narrative we will inlcude and whether it will be amplified, disjunctive or illustrative. We also went through our themes and issues that will be present within the video.

6 Positive Targets from feedback…

• We have included lip syncing.
• Performance is included.
• A transition has been used.
• We added a filter to the video.

6 Goals for improvement…

• Have another story within the video e.g. something significant to show that she is moving on from her ex.
• Use more filters.
• More of a variety of transitions.
• Focus more on different angles.
• Better MISE EN SCENE.
• More variety of performance and narrative.