Intro: Here is our draft 2 which includes all of our titles. We have had feedback from another member of the class telling us what is going well and what we could maybe change in their opinion. We have disused their feed back as a group and talked about what we are going to change.

Feedback Summary – 

The colour of the font works really well with the background colours as we have gone for a dark blue look. When the titles disappear and move with the shots this is also good and it makes it unique. The animations of the titles are good especially the submerged one. And the positioning of the titles are good too. Some of the titles just pop up and they need an animate in so continuity is good. The sizes of the titles are also different which may take away the tidiness of some of them.

Self Assessment –

What is going well:

1. We have made some titles so Nick walks in front of them which makes them look like they are part of the shot.
2. We have made the titles disappear at the end of the shots which is effective and unique.
3. We have used a sans serif font which makes it fit in with the style of an old creepy thriller. The red also compliments this.

Targets to work on:

1. We need to make sure all the tiles have the same animate in and out so our continuity is right.
2. I think we need to make some of the titles last for a little bit longer and some go to quick especially the submerged one.
3. We need to ensure that all of our titles are the same size so it looks professional and polished.