Intro: This is our first draft of the thriller, the reason for doing this is to check if we have enough shots and to make sure that our continuity is right.  I think for our first draft this is  good.

What is going well:

• Our continuity is right and it all makes sense.
• Our footage is of a good quality so this will make it easier to change and make even better.

What needs to be improved:

• Some of our shots are not great, we will need to re film these when we film again.
•  We need to improve all of the jump cuts we have to make it flow a lot better.
• Our holding a shot steady is not great as although we used a tripod because it was windy that was making the tripod wobble, we should have used something to weigh this down.

Targets:

• We need to colour correct everything and make all of our shots look the same otherwise it looks odd.
• We will need to steady our shots so they are not as shaky and it looks more professional.
• We also have to rotate the shots that are not straight, this is key as you can see quite a few horizons and they are key to keep straight.