All of the feedback was really useful, so we’ve edited our Draft 1 sequence in response to this, below you can see some of the changes we have made to the sequence. Additionally, we shortened many of our clips as it was evident they went on longer then they needed too.
Here we added a fade transition to emphasis the dark, low key lighting surrounding the antagonist.
Here we have tried out some effects to the shot, using the ‘directional blur’ tool to make it much more dramatic and reflect his anger.
Here we used the colour correction wheel to change the tones of the clip, to try and get more of a thriller-esqe look.
Here we used the ‘cross fade’ transition between the two shots of the characters walking and got this graphic match cut.
Here we used the ‘sharpen’ tool to try and fix the slight blurriness that one of our peers pointed out.
Here we used the colour correction tool with three wheels which allowed us to get a very specific tone.