Here is my first draft of my music magazine Contents page, this includes a photo from my photo shoot in town. I made my Contents page on Indesign.
Peer Feedback: Braden Bougourd, I told Braden to research different contents pages so that he could understand the conventions and give me some valuable feedback so that I could make professional improvements to my first draft.
Describe The Contents Page Cover Star- Their Star Image?
“The model looks very cool and looks like she is independent and charismatic. The look on her face is intriguing as she is very seriously glaring at the camera which connotes that there is a story behind this.”
Are There Areas Where The Integration And Copy Is Distracting?
“It is a plain contents page so everything is clear and easy to read, the bold fonts work well.”
What Aspects Do You Consider Conventional And Conventional?
“The image is conventional as it is large and takes up a lot of the page. Also the actual contents is done well as it stands out and is clear. Something that is not conventional is that there is no background, even some colour would improve this.”
Some other conventional aspects of a contents page are:
- Boarders
- Bold Writing
- Colourful
- Clear
Summery:
In conclusion the feedback that I received was positive but there is obviously improvements to be made, the improvements I will make are:
- All writing is in line.
- Less fonts used (different fonts.)
- Background colour.
- Boarder around image in bottom left.