Here all of my pages so far, I have made improvements to both my Front Cover and Double Page Spread. The reasons for the changes are to better my work to suit the conventions of my genre music magazine.

On my contents page I have added borders around some of my text, this is because without the borders it looks like there is no organisation and if the text ha just been thrown in there randomly. Also I aligned the text on the right to the right, this again makes the page look more organised and professional.

For my double page spread I re-positioned my quote on the image, this was because it is now in a more clear spot and looks tidy whereas it was in an awkward small space beforehand.