Attached below is my digipak draft 2, where my teacher gave me some constructive criticism towards it, highlighting what went well and where I can make more improvements.
Teacher feedback
WHAT WENT WELL
- The old fashioned font works well with the artists genre
- The chosen colour scheme correlates well with the imagery
IMPROVEMENTS TO BE MADE
- Use the ampersand instead of ‘and’
- The artists name at the bottom of the page at the bottom needs to be bigger
- All imagery overall needs to be bigger
- Essentials like the bar code and copyright needs to be included
- The album song names need to be re arranged- move off artists face
- The two middle panes need to line up correctly
- The world needs to have more of a clearer meaning within the digipak
- Include more orange in the front pane so it matches the middle panes
- Make the planets more visible
Focusing forward, there is clearly a lot of work to be made to the digipak. When it comes to my draft 3, my partner and I will take into consideration the improvements that need to be made, in order to convey our star image strongly, with a unique brand face.