Attached below is my draft three music video along side my teachers screencastify she did of our music video.

Attachment of my teachers feedback (screencastify).

Improvements to be made:

• Swap the first two clips of Freya singing, start off with the close up
• More screen time when putting the necklace on as it is an important part of the narrative
• More screen time when getting the dress out of the wardrobe, feels a bit rushed
• Have a close up of the model kissing the photo frame as the message isn’t clear enough
• One of the clips is out of sync
• The part scene feels a bit rushed, no need for the speed up
• Have a close up of the model leaving the party, need to see more emotion to connect the audience

Focusing forward, now having feedback from our teacher we know what exactly needs to be improved. As a pair me and my partner have decided to re shoot several clips, ensuring we take into consideration these improvements that have been suggested.