Attached below is my digipak draft 2, where my teacher gave me some constructive criticism towards it, highlighting what went well and where I can make more improvements.

 

Teacher feedback

WHAT WENT WELL

• The old fashioned font works well with the artists genre
• The chosen colour scheme correlates well with the imagery

IMPROVEMENTS TO BE MADE

• Use the ampersand instead of ‘and’
• The artists name at the bottom of the page at the bottom needs to be bigger
• All imagery overall needs to be bigger
• Essentials like the bar code and copyright needs to be included
• The album song names need to be re arranged- move off artists face
• The two middle panes need to line up correctly
• The world needs to have more of a clearer meaning within the digipak
• Include more orange in the front pane so it matches the middle panes
• Make the planets more visible

Focusing forward, there is clearly a lot of work to be made to the digipak. When it comes to my draft 3, my partner and I will take into consideration the improvements that need to be made, in order to convey our star image strongly, with a unique brand face.