December
5
A New Improved Feature Article
What I changed:
- the age of my artist
- the description of the bistro
- added some reported speech
- added information about one of her songs
- added some personal opinions from the journalist
What will my changes bring to the article?
- social interaction and personal identity for the reader
- allow the reader to connect and relate to the artist
Targets:
- change the language so it has a more formal tone