Feedback from 1st draft of DPS

Some feedback that I received for my first draft of my double page spread was:

• Good photo, but enlarge it a bit more
• Framing of photo good
• Move the quote to break up the article
• Good typeface for article title
• Stand first too long
• Different body font

Targets for Next Draft

• Enlarge photo a bit more
• Move quote onto body text
• Shorten standfirst
• Change body font