My full magazine
Feedback from teacher…
What’s New?
Font page-
- With my front page I have slightly altered my colours to make them more vibrant and to in order to match them better to the colours in the models necklace. Doing this has also made the text pop out from the page better.
- I have also enlarged the image because I felt it was being drowned out by all the surrounding text, As the main feature of the front page the cover star should stand out the most. Also I felt by doing this it would cover more of the page and fill some of the empty space
Contents page-
- On my contents page I have shifted everything upwards slightly allowing me to make my image and text larger.
- Also I have moved around the page numbers in order for them to fit better with the limited space.
- I added the blue gradient background that compliments the gold and pink text to lift everything off the page rather than sitting on a flat white background.
Double Page Spread-
- For my double page spread I have enlarged the heading and stand first on page 7 in order to make that text in particular more attractive to the reader as its going to incise them to read more.
- I also changed the font of my stand first and pull quotes to a bolder font that fits better with the font of my article text.
- I have also moved my pull quote on page 6 slightly to the left in order to make sure it is not too close to the centre fold where it might potentially be cut off.
Summary of teachers feedback –
- Make sure all the fonts are consistent and at a good size.
- Make my stand firsts snappy and direct and relative.
- Move date and price from too corner and add a barcode.
- Put images back into photoshop and adjust colours.
- Replace place holder text.
My Targets-
- Enough content on contents page.
- Stand firsts and pull quotes to break up the page.
- Images and titles are of the correct size (not too big or to small)
- Replace all place holder text, Add in my article and check for spelling and grammatical errors throughout my magazine.