This is my new and improved final copy of magazine.

My targets were:

• Front cover
  • Make the Vers title bigger
  • Put the plug on the top left
  • Align the ‘Dave’ and ‘Grammy award winning’ to the right
  • increase the size of the word ‘Dave’
  • Move the date and bar-code bottom right
• Contents page
  • Align the text boxes on right side better
  • Make the numbers bigger
  • Add a number on the photos to know where they relate too.
• DPS
  • Move the text in a bit allowing the same spacing around the outside.