Feedback on our second draft from specsavers

  • Adjust colours and contrast with lumetri colour
  • Utilise warp stabilising on narrative shots to eliminate shaky footage
  • Use key framing to break up boring long shots
  • Multi layered shots using opacity
Draft 3 

What went well

  • We incorporated warp stabilising to utilise some narrative shots
  • We included more visually interesting shots using key framing
  • Added colour correction to some shots
  • Added some shots using letter beads

What we need to improve:

  • Lacking a number of narrative shots
  • Fix the ending
  • Add special effects
Teachers Feedback

  • Don’t cut straight to Fran singing
  • Break the longer shots up
  • Add in more visual metaphors
  • Add in more shots that connect the audience to Fran
  • Less midshots
  • Use more outdoor shots
  • Remove swearwords
  • More closer shots
  • Slowly pan into pool shot of them holding hands
  • More letter effects sooner in the video
  • ‘I still wanna be your favourite boy’ change that shot because he looks away/add something to it
  •  On the overlay near the end make sure he isn’t singing
  • Make ther holding hands at the end slo-mo
  • Move the running shot to the end of the video