Feedback on our second draft from specsavers
- Adjust colours and contrast with lumetri colour
- Utilise warp stabilising on narrative shots to eliminate shaky footage
- Use key framing to break up boring long shots
- Multi layered shots using opacity
Draft 3
What went well
- We incorporated warp stabilising to utilise some narrative shots
- We included more visually interesting shots using key framing
- Added colour correction to some shots
- Added some shots using letter beads
What we need to improve:
- Lacking a number of narrative shots
- Fix the ending
- Add special effects
Teachers Feedback
- Don’t cut straight to Fran singing
- Break the longer shots up
- Add in more visual metaphors
- Add in more shots that connect the audience to Fran
- Less midshots
- Use more outdoor shots
- Remove swearwords
- More closer shots
- Slowly pan into pool shot of them holding hands
- More letter effects sooner in the video
- ‘I still wanna be your favourite boy’ change that shot because he looks away/add something to it
- On the overlay near the end make sure he isn’t singing
- Make ther holding hands at the end slo-mo
- Move the running shot to the end of the video
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