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Feedback from teacher.

• columns are unequal
• headline is not at all catchy
• photos are all too similar and too many of them….
• page numbers
• byline and photography by
• caption the photoss
• turn off hyphenate
• like the chevrons but is it a rap colour palette?
• standfirst needs to be in bolder, bigger font
• Drop capital for where the article starts.

Five Targets

• Work on placement of images
• Work on spacing out fonts
• Sort out heading
• Work with the fonts
• Maybe add a bit more colour