Introduction:
The contents page is very important as it shows what’s going to appear throughout the magazine with specific page numbers to help the reader find what they’re looking for. This makes the magazine easier to navigate around, it also allows the reader to view what pages they like to sound of instead of flicking through struggling to find what they want.
CONTENTS PAGE PEER ASSESSMENT
What type of shots have been used to create a variety of shot distances and how has the camera been used to communicate meaning?
He has used a variant of different shots, such as long, mid and closes up which is unique and adds a cool effect.
What choice of Mise en scene is appropriate for the star image and genre?
His mise en scene choices are limited in his pictures, since he has great lighting, but as little to no hair and make up or film texture. His use of costume works in his favor but could add more contrasting clothing. But otherwise a good use and contrast of mise en scenes
How far is the font used readable and reflects the genre?
The fount used is really clear in the ways it’s used to represent the genre of the type of hip hop he is trying to portray. The use of the slang writing with smiley faces and circles around the capital letter endure that I keep reading, and keeps me notified that I’m still reading a hip hop magazine.
What technical conventions of a Contents page are present and used effectively?
He’s used all of the technical conventions useful and efficiently, such as incest, cover lines and page numbers, he’s also included a giant sign stating its a context page, but next time it would be nice if he added captions towards the pictures so I know who the guy in the picture is.
How has Indesign been used to layout the page to convey a brand?
Indesign has been used to create an outline of the context page with his title/name written around the outside. I think this is a good use of his resources and time since it creates a sense of gritty hip hop.
How well have the text and visuals been integrated together?
To a certain extent he’s done them efficiently, but the outline of the picture is a different shade of black. The writing and color pallets have been integrated well.
Where has photoshop been used to manipulate the photos to enhance the star image or genre?
Photoshop had not been used. Well he states he cut out the records.
How is the language used appropriate for the genre and target audience?
The language used is toward an older audience since he uses phrases like, “P30 A PICTURE OF UR MUM”.
My 5 clear targets:
- Use more cover lines to allow more clarity for the reader.
- Use more effects to make the contents page more interesting, engaging the reader even further.
- Use more colourful and a wider pallet to attract the reader and gain more interest.
- Use PhotoShop to cut out the model to give the contents page a more professional look.
- Use subtexts so my readers know that they are looking at.