Draft 1

Moving on from our narrative cut, the next step is to make a first draft of our thriller. For this to happen we had to cut large clips of our narrative cut, to reduce the amount of walking that we had in it. We had to do this in order to make the sequence have more scenes and also to make sure that it didn’t run over the time limit.

We then decided to change the flashback shots to black and white and use the colour correction effect to make the only colour in the scene the red dress that the girl is wearing, as we thought it fitted in well with our theme for the thriller.

Below is the first draft of our thriller

Below is the feedback that we got about our draft 1. In this document they write what they like and dislike about our thriller and also targets for it. From this feedback we will take in consideration the targets they have said and also what they dislike about our thriller, to make sure our thriller is the best that it can be.

Please click on the image to see the document in full.