To achieve our first draft, we went on to edit our rough cut further. We managed to cut down clips and make the whole clip run a lot more smoothly. Also, we feel the opening sequence makes a lot more sense as it seems to be in a much better order. Furthermore, after the re-filming day we managed to discard the dark shots and use the new, better lighting ones, improving the story line of our thriller a lot.

Draft 1 peer

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Draft 1 peerrr

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Once we completed our first draft, we had to share it with another group. This assessed our work and gave us some very good advice. We now know what we have done well in and what needs to be improved. Without this peer assessment, we may not have noticed some of the things that should be worked on.

Some targets we received from this task were:

  • Use some different shot transitions.
  • Sort out the two audio mistakes.