Contents Page – Draft 1 and feedback

Compare and contrast some real contents pages – what do you notice that is similar among them all?  Use the real magazines in class.

Menu/Ingredients
  • Editors hello
  • Page numbers
  • Hyperbole and superlatives in headlines
  • Images and word clues
  • Graphic illustrations and designs
  • Reminder of the magazine’s name and mission statement

It will also contain some photos that relate to the listed articles / features.

Example 1
Example 2
Example 3

SOME INSPIRATION

Use some of the ideas in the Headline Grabbers post to craft some intriguing, exciting, captivating captions and cover lines.

Feedback Draft 2 Contents Page

Record on your phone, a peer giving you feedback on…have a conversation

  • How does the contents page work in tandem with the front cover?
    • Is the font/typeface consistent with the front cover?
    • What genre of music is the contents page featuring?
  • Describe the images of the stars using adjectives.
  • Which cover-lines tempt the audience to read on and which ones stand out and why?
  • How do the cover-lines reflect a music magazine? If they don’t,  which ones need to be adapted?
  • Which areas, aspects have distracting areas of integration of copy and images?
  • What aspects do you consider conventional or unconventional (page numbers, inserts, captions, catchy cover lines, editors comment?
  • Summarize and then act on their feedback with @ 3-5 specific targets to address.

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